Live Score · 实时得分 (AI 60% · Self 20% · Peer 20%)
0 /30 points
CoT Structure 思路结构0.0/11
Grammar 语法0.0/16
Culture 文化意识0.0/3
Active Editor · 当前编辑
AI Auto column updates live · Self & Peer columns are clickable
30pts

Evaluation Rubric — 30 points.评价量表

Three lenses: CoT Structure 11 pts · Grammar 16 pts · Cultural Awareness 3 pts. Three voices: AI Auto · Self · Peer.三大维度:思路结构 11 分 · 语法准确性 16 分 · 跨文化意识 3 分。三种评价:AI 智评、自评、互评。

Detailed Rubric · 详细评分矩阵
CoT 11 Grammar 16 Culture 3
A · CoT Structure思路结构
/11
Criterion 评分项 Pts AI Self Peer
A1Clear Heading.有明确的标题 1
A2Proper Salutation.使用恰当的称呼 1
A3States Purpose in opening.开篇说明来意 2
A4Relevant Personal Info.交代基本信息 2
A5Highlights Strengths with examples.突出个人优势并举例 3
A6Confident Closing + call-to-action.结尾自信并呼应 2
A7Proper Sign-off. (provided in template)使用规范的署名(模板已给出)
Subtotal小计 /11 0 0 0
B · Grammar语法准确性
/16
Criterion 评分项 Pts AI Self Peer
B1Correct preposition collocation (apply for, graduate from).介词搭配正确 2
B2Correct V-ing after prepositions (look forward to / good at / familiar with).介词后用动名词正确 2
B3Correct tense (past "graduated", present "is").时态正确 2
B4Correct non-finite verb forms (infinitives, participles).非谓语动词形式正确 2
B5Correct subject-verb agreement (I am, my major is).主谓一致正确 2
B6Correct punctuation, spelling, & capitalization.标点、拼写、大小写正确 2
B7Correct noun number (singular vs plural; uncountable nouns like "software").名词单复数正确(如 software 不可数) 2
B8Translation accuracy & completeness (no missing words, no swapped meaning).翻译准确完整(无漏译/错译) 2
Subtotal小计 /16 0 0 0
C · Culture跨文化意识
/3
Criterion 评分项 Pts AI Self Peer
C1Correct salutation/sign-off pair.称呼和署名搭配正确 1
C2Confident tone — no self-deprecation.自信不自谦 1
C3Omits Chinese-only personal info (age, marriage).省略年龄、婚姻等中式信息 1
Subtotal小计 /3 0 0 0
Total Score总分
/30
AI Auto · 智评 0
Self · 自评 0
Peer · 互评 0
U7 · Lesson 2 · While-writing · Activity 04
Practice · Fill in the blanks · 写作训练

Your turn — write the letter. 实战练习 · 动笔写一封

Wang Fang has shown you how. Now complete Li Ming's job application letter using the Chinese prompt — then evaluate it yourself, with a peer, and let the AI auto-grade it. 王芳已经做了示范。现在请你根据下方中文求职信,补全李明的英文求职信,然后自评、互评、AI 智评三步走。

Your task · 任务: Read the Chinese job application letter on the left, fill in the blanks on the right, and write the personal strengths paragraph yourself. Don't translate Chinese cultural formulas literally! 阅读左侧的中文求职信,在右侧填空补全英文版,并独立完成"个人优势"段落。不要直译中文文化套语!
中文求职信

尊敬的黄经理:

您好!

非常感谢您在百忙之中阅读我的求职信。我叫李明,今年18岁,是厦门职业技术学院2025届酒店管理专业的应届毕业生。从贵公司的招聘启事中得知贵酒店正在招聘前台接待员,我怀着诚挚的心向您毛遂自荐。

在校期间,我系统学习了《酒店管理学》、《前厅服务与管理》、《酒店英语》等专业课程。我性格开朗、勤奋好学;擅长英语口语,能熟练使用电脑办公软件,善于与人沟通。课余喜欢阅读和旅行。

虽然我才疏学浅,但我相信凭借自己的热情与勤奋,一定能够胜任这份工作。期待您的回音!

此致

敬礼!

求职人:李明
2025年5月20日
Your English Job Application Letter · 你的英文求职信
Fill in each blank · auto-saves as you type
01Heading 标题1 pt
Job Letter
02Salutation 称呼1 pt
Dear ,
03Purpose 来意2 pts
I am writing to of .
04Personal Information 基本信息2 pts
My first name is .
My last name is . I Xiamen Vocational Technology College.
My Hotel Management.
No age · No marital status · Western convention · 不写年龄/婚姻——西式惯例
05Personal Strengths 个人优势3 pts
.
I can speak English fluently.
I am familiar with .
.
I in my spare time.
Be confident — no self-deprecation! · 自信表达,避免自谦套语
06Closing 结尾2 pts
I believe I will be fit for the job.
I hearing from you soon.
07Sign-off 署名1 pt
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
Not submitted yet · 尚未提交

When you finish your letter, click Hand In to get the AI to grade your work. Editing afterward will reset the AI evaluation.完成后点击"Hand In",AI 会立即批改。如修改答案,需重新提交。

AI Error Breakdown — cumulative across submissions.AI 错误分析 · 历次累计

No errors detected
A Day at Work · While-writing · Activity 04
U7 · Lesson 2 · Fill-in-the-blanks · 30-pt practice
写作训练 · 自评 + 互评 + AI 智评